The Ark Hotel: Before the Dawn is an erotic romance with strong romance. Before the Dawn has been submitted to Sizzler Intoxications. These six sentences have not been professionally edited by our editor.
Setup:
Angie met a woman and a man who give back in a “Pay it Forward” sense. Outside of the restaurant, Noah starts to see some truth from Angie’s abused past. He is trying to show her that not all men will hit.
Our six:
“I thought he loved me. I thought if I tried hard enough I could be better and then he would be better.”
A strong hand lifted her chin from her chest and wiped away the glistening drops. “Angie, love doesn’t leave these kind of marks.”
She froze at his tender touch, then backed away suddenly. Gathering herself together again, Angie put the brakes on her fluttering heart.
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We hope you enjoyed our six today. We would love to hear from you. Thanks for stopping by! Have a great Sunday!
Rhea Archer
16 comments:
I like. Very nice six.
great six
So tragic. Wonderful emotion. Great six!!
Nice, tender six. Love her internal struggle.
I enjoyed this! thank you for posting. I think it's good to tackle tough subjects in our writings, maybe fiction will even help someone who relates to the scenario.
That line 1st line really stabbed me in the heart b/c it reminded me of what I did to keep things together with my ex. Great 6! really felt something there...
Very nice. Love the little glimpse into the character's emotions.
Oh, Nice six! :-)Keeps me wanting more!
Nice six. Enjoyed it.
Nicely done. Love his line that love doesn't leave marks. Perfect.
Very sweet and tender six!!
Sad! Wish she would let him comfort her!! Conflicted filled Six!!
Great emotion. Thanks for sharing!
Loved this six! So why didn't he get better when she did?
How tender, touching and sensual- great 6
Dawne P
I love the line when he says, Love does not leave these kind of marks." Very well done.
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