Friday, September 23, 2011

Flash Fiction Friday post #5


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George’s wife insisted he wear the feminine colored underwear, said it would enhance the Breast Cancer calendar sales. The awareness hit too close for George, for his precise Misty was a five year survivor.

He lay on the bed and waited for the next position to model. George watched his wife’s lip turn to a cute little smile.

“Okay, lean up and smolder at me, my love.”

“Like this?”

“Perfect,” she purred. “After this you deserve a treat.”

George settled his eyes on Misty’s breasts. Though they were implants with tattooed nipples, he loved to love her.

“We’re almost done.”

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Rhea Archer

12 comments:

VenusBookluvr said...

Love the direction of your story!!

Heaven Liegh said...

I love how you manage to capture a scene with a message. So many times a writer's message overtakes their work. This what not the case in your FFF> I loved it!

Benjamin Tiberius Russell said...

This is sweet and touching. A nice tribute to the pink warriors and the men who love them. Very, very well done.

Katie Harper said...

Y'all always write the sweetest things. You sent a profound message without losing the story. GREAT JOB!!

Bonni S. said...

Loved the play between lovers. Excellent FFF post.

Jade said...

A great story with a great message!! love it

Muffy Wilson said...

This was poignant and touching. The interaction between the characters was really special. So much in so little. I loved this FFF. Excellent:) xo

Sara York said...

Ah, what a sweetheart. Love your story. Very touching.

LB said...

aww... that was touching!

Havan said...

Now that was truly beautiful! And it hits home - perfect! :)

Davee said...

I really enjoyed this one. Such a sincere message and the love he feels for her is obvious, through everything. :)

Lisa Worrall said...

Lovely